Assignment 5 Results
Welcome to the results page. First, take a look at the slideshow video below to find out what place you ended up in!
Now that you've watched the slideshow, take a look at your scores and comments from the judges.
Your comments are listed in the order you submitted, not in the order you ended up!
Your comments are listed in the order you submitted, not in the order you ended up!
NShipp & Cecilia Grace
73.5 points
Photo Quality: 7/10
Photo Presentation: 6/10 Overall Creativity: 12/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 3/5 Total: 36/50 I really like the idea you had here. I love the use of the red and white and how the blue is just popping out as a bright accent color. I also think the pose choice for Cecilia is a great one! Unfortunately, the proportions in this shot really throw the image off. Cecilia is far to big for this setting – she’d be a GIANT and wouldn’t fit through the trailer door. I understand that the choice in background must have been a smaller image, but that just means resizing your model to fit appropriately. Unfortunately, that didn’t happen here and it throws the image off. |
Photo Quality: 7/10
Photo Presentation: 6/10 Overall Creativity: 12/15 High Fashion: 9/10 Judge's Preference: 3.5/5 Total: 37.5/50 I absolutely love this photo at first glance. It is the quintessential Americana. However, your model is so big that were she to go into that doorway, she wouldn't fit through it or be able to stand inside the trailer! Your proportions got you again this time. Your model should be much smaller. And try not to cut off the tip of your model's feet; you seem to do that a lot but you need a little bit of space below it or it's jarring. I do love that you used blue as mostly an accent though! |
TEXASTWANGTONYA & Lexx Weinstein
74 points
Photo Quality: 8/10
Photo Presentation: 7/10 Overall Creativity: 11/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 3/5 Total: 37/50 Okay, so I adore the idea. You’ve got a fun little room with a great record player prop and it appears as if you styled Lexx quite nicely. Unfortunately, the all-yellow background makes Lexx disappear into it. If you had broken up the background with a black/white/yellow pattern or even chosen one of your other colors (other than yellow) instead, it would have helped to make Lexx pop out of the photo. Otherwise, you did well. You have a good pose and a nice idea going here. |
Photo Quality: 8/10
Photo Presentation: 8/10 Overall Creativity: 10/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 3/5 Total: 37/50 I have to say that this is just a bit too yellow. I see there's black, but it's kind of hard to distinguish your model from the background. This also doesn't really have a theme, which I wish it did, but I'm happy to see you tried something in game! I think if that lamp were in black tones it'd have been much better. This photo is good but a little underwhelming. Maybe some black and white pictures on the wall? Literally any decor? |
Abel & Nina Reese
87 points
Photo Quality: 9/10
Photo Presentation: 9/10 Overall Creativity: 14/15 High Fashion: 9.5/10 Judge's Preference: 5/5 Total: 46.5/50 This is a stunning entry! I am seriously impressed with this one! You definitely hit the nail on the head with the pinup motif. The clothing is perfect, the way you styled Nina’s hair and makeup was amazing, and the pose was spectacular. I also appreciate that you tried to match the grainy/paint-like quality of the background choice. It’s not a perfect match, but it was very close. I loved this entry! |
Photo Quality: 7/10
Photo Presentation: 9/10 Overall Creativity: 11/15 High Fashion: 9.5/10 Judge's Preference: 4/5 Total: 40.5/50 As I said before, this reminds me of the Hilda painting prints! However, it is very jarring because the quality of the set is just so different from the quality of the Sim. Your model does look very high fashion though! There are a few places on her outer edges that look super blurred, and on her left (your right) knee, the chair shine is warped with her leg. But this entry was amazing! |
Socal & Autumn Cash
75 points
Photo Quality: 7/10
Photo Presentation: 6/10 Overall Creativity: 11/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 3.5/5 Total: 35.5/50 This was a great idea. I really like how you placed Autumn on the hood of the Hum-V. I think that the way you styled her and the use of the vehicle were perfect choices. The setting, on the other hand, was not a great choice. This would have rocked in an outdoor setting. Oh man, it would have been amazing in a desert setting! I do think this screams “pinup” so great job on that front! |
Photo Quality: 8/10
Photo Presentation: 8/10 Overall Creativity: 11/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 4.5/5 Total: 39.5/50 BOOOOO ARMY! Go Navy! XD I mentioned my cousin and I rag on each other over that. Anyway, your Army pinup is awesome! I'd just say maybe instead of camo wallpaper, and the logo, have her in the desert somewhere, where a lot of times they end up! (Cousin is currently on his second tour in Afghanistan...Lots of sand.) I do like how you made the Hummer look like a military vehicle! I do have to say that the outfit is very low quality. But this is a quintessential pin-up and I overall love it! |
wrswrs2 & Victoria Berman
86.5 points
Photo Quality: 9/10
Photo Presentation: 8.5/10 Overall Creativity: 13/15 High Fashion: 8/10 Judge's Preference: 4.5/5 Total: 43/50 I really adore this shot, Wrs! Victoria is amazing in her retro swimwear, inner tube, and adorable pink hat!! I really like everything going on in this photo – maybe if the surf boards each had a different pattern on them, it would have added a little more interest to the background. I also wish Victoria were looking at the camera and had less of an angry look on her face. Overall, though, this was one of the best this round! |
Photo Quality: 8.5/10
Photo Presentation: 9/10 Overall Creativity: 13/15 High Fashion: 8.5/10 Judge's Preference: 4.5/5 Total: 43.5/50 I love your Maxis Match! And I usually hate Maxis Match. This was so cute of a theme and I think it's one of my favorites of the round. I just wish all the surf boards weren't the same pattern. I mean I know there had to be a palette, but what five or six people all have the same board? The inner tube is totally cute though and your model is rocking it in her vintage swimwear and cute captain's hat. |
Jojo & Udele Avdeyev
81 + 5 = 86 points
Photo Quality: 8/10
Photo Presentation: 7/10 Overall Creativity: 10/15 High Fashion: 9/10 Judge's Preference: 4/5 Total: 38/50 This was cute. I think it was unique and fun and I really like the pose choice. The fringe swimwear was neat too! Overall, this was done well. I’m a fan, but the placement was a bit off. She doesn’t appear to be really standing on the rocks. It’s a slight angle difference. I also wish this were just a little more obviously retro pinup. It’s unique, but it does seem very different from what most expect from retro pinup. I also don’t see as much of a color palette in this one. With the green swimwear, I’d think maybe a lake or pond instead of the beach to get that green all around. |
Photo Quality: 8/10
Photo Presentation: 8/10 Overall Creativity: 13/15 High Fashion: 9/10 Judge's Preference: 5/5 Total: 43/50 I love the hula hoop - grass skirt bikini idea! The only issue I have with it is her standing on the rock. It just doesn't look natural. She's standing on parts of it that wouldn't be flat. Wouldn't be comfortable to stand on in heels. Also the parts would be shadowed, but they're not. She looks like she has a little bit of floating sim syndrome. But this is super cute! |
Mizzie & Melina Ross
85.5 points
Photo Quality: 9/10
Photo Presentation: 7/10 Overall Creativity: 12/15 High Fashion: 8.5/10 Judge's Preference: 4/5 Total: 40.5/50 I do really like this. I think it’s fun, playful, adorable, and very retro housewife. I also think the whole wine idea was great! Melina is spectacular in that look and her coy little expression is perfect. Something about this, however, just doesn’t wow me. It feels adorably safe. But overall, I did like the shot! |
Photo Quality: 9/10
Photo Presentation: 9/10 Overall Creativity: 13/15 High Fashion: 9/10 Judge's Preference: 5/5 Total: 45/50 Noooo she dropped the wine! RIP WINE! I know you said that your reds weren't all the same exact color, and that's fine, but I don't feel like aqua and red are the best combination of color. The white does help though. I feel like the spilling wine is kind of odd; it's black with a red dot on each droplet. I think doing a dark red would have been better and then putting some dodge on it. And then a smaller dodge for highlights. I do totally love her 50s housewife get up though! |